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 | align="center" |[[File:BombPanel.png|25px]]
 |[[Bomb]] Panel
-|A bomb appears on Kirby's hands. The farther the player holds A, the farther Kirby throws it. The explosion does small damage but covers a large radius that slowly increases in size until it disappears.
+|A bomb appears in Kirby's hands. The farther the player holds A, the farther Kirby throws it. The explosion does small damage but covers a large radius that slowly increases in size until it disappears.
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 | align="center" |[[File:FirePanel.png|25px]]
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 |[[Plasma]] Panel
-|Very much like in ''[[Kirby Super Star]]'', Kirby can charge up his energy levels when the player wiggles the control stick back and forth. This ability lasts depending on how much the player uses it and how much power it uses up.
+|Very much like in ''[[Kirby Super Star]]'', Kirby can charge up his energy levels when the player wiggles the control stick back and forth. This ability's duration depends on how much the player uses it and how much power it uses up.
 *Level 1: Kirby punches several small beams
 *Level 2: Kirby punches more small beams
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 | align="center" |[[File:TornadoPanel.png|25px]]
 |[[Tornado]] Panel
-|The Tornado ability grants Kirby a powered up quick spin that can be performed midair. When Kirby first gets this ability, any nearby opponent gets affected by the start-up attack.
+|The Tornado ability grants Kirby a powered-up [[Quick Spin]] that can be performed in midair. When Kirby first gets this ability, any nearby opponent gets affected by the start-up attack.
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 | align="center" |[[File:WheelPanel.png|25px]]
 |[[Wheel]] Panel
-|This copy ability turns Kirby into a wheel. It is quite fast, touches the ground so it activates any switches on the ground, and damages any opponents that touch it.
+|This copy ability turns Kirby into a wheel. It is quite fast, touches the ground by default (so it automatically activates any [[switch]]es on the ground), and damages any opponents that touch it.
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 | align="center" |[[File:WingPanel.png|25px]]
 |[[Wing]] Panel
-|When Kirby gets the Wing ability, he temporarily loses his vehicle and flies using the ability. His quick spin is slightly different than the regular quick spin; it sends opponents flying in the air. Opponents cannot draft him, but he cannot draft opponents either when he has this ability.
+|When Kirby gets the Wing ability, he temporarily loses his vehicle and flies using the ability. His Quick Spin is slightly different than the regular Quick Spin; it sends opponents flying in the air. Opponents cannot draft him, but he cannot draft opponents either when he has this ability.
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 |align="center"|[[File:DragoonPart 1.png|25px]]<br>[[File:DragoonPart 2.png|25px]]<br>[[File:DragoonPart 3.png|25px]]