User talk:Sunmarsh

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-- Kirbot (talk) 18:08, 15 September 2019 (UTC)

Regarding your recent pages

Greetings. I first want to thank you for your contributions so far. I understand you've looked at the recent complaints in the referendum talk page and admitted to going a little overboard with the fluffy writing. Your articles were cute, but they do stretch the limits on professionalism. Here are some specific tips going forward:

• Don't use first and second person pronouns in article text. Articles should always be written in third person.
• Make sure to keep an in-universe style. (e.g. describe what Kirby is doing in stages rather than what the player should do)
• Do not use referential humor, unless it regards a specific reference offered by the content itself.
• Do not talk directly to characters or to the reader.
• Don't use questions in main article text. Questions are tolerated in moderation in image captions only.
  • The same rules applies to exclamation marks.
• Don't use emojis in text.

If you are unsure about the preferred writing style, have a look at some of the other stage synopses on the wiki. Most of them were written by me, and you can see my preferred style within. I will be codifying a lot of what I've said to you here in the new policy, so it should be clearer going forward. Cheers, --Fubaka (talk) 02:52, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

Noted, noted, and noted! Sorry for any trouble! (talk) 03:10, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

Incidentally, I've taken the liberty of adjusting the first page The Adventure Begins to place it within acceptable parameters. If I could get you to take a look at the changes and apply them to Up the Big 'Ol Tree as well, I would appreciate it. --Fubaka (talk) 03:12, 21 September 2019 (UTC)

I'm on my way! (talk) 03:17, 21 September 2019 (UTC)